I revisited this track and tidied up some of the quantized bits which were a bit off and reworked the vocals so they aren’t out front as much, and looked at the dynaics of the track, I might go back and look at some of the percussive sounds and look it more build and break elements would add to it.
Originally I wanted this to be quite voice led with the main rhythm coming from the voice and the singing and that to be the back bone of the track , so still not sure about this right now.
Anyway enjoy this version of the track

and here is the older version that was also a final for now, when will it ever end..

enjoy